A translation of The Lady of Shalott by Lord Alfred Tennyson.
|Sindarin||Literal English||Original English|
|Bo ath-rant dorthar breniel
rídhien1 i-thair theriel,
Hammar dawar, govenir ell2;
A thrî rîdh i ven hiriel
Am marad Camelod;
Adh in gwaith dadwen a dandol,
Tired had i-ningloer lodol
Nu-din os dol,
I dol Salod3.
|On either side of the river they dwell lasting
Great fields of the thriving grasses,
They clothe woods, they meet the sky;
And through fields the road flowing
To the fortress of Camelot;
And the peoples go back and forth
Seeing a place of water-lilies floating
Beneath them around an island,
The island of Shalott.
|On either side the river lie
Long fields of barley and of rye,
That clothe the wold and meet the sky;
And through the field the road runs by
To many-towered Camelot;
And up and down the people go,
Gazing where the lilies blow
Round an island there below,
The island of Shalott.
|Yrn girir, tethair nimmidar,
Hwist dithin hwiniar a thuiar
Trî i ‘ôl4 i ui-hiriar
min hirion a thol na char
Rimmad an Gamelod.
Canad raim a beraid vithrin
Orthirir i had-i-phirin,
Adh i dol dhínen baugla dhîn
I chiril os Salod.
|Trees quiver, willows whiten,
Quiet breezes twirl and blow
Through the wave that flows forever
In the great river with the island with a building
Flowing to Camelot.
Four grey walls and towers,
Overlook the place of the winking flowers.
And the silent isle oppresses silently
The lady of Shalott.
|Willows whiten, aspens quiver,
Little breezes dusk and shiver
Through the wave that runs for ever
By the island in the river
Flowing down to Camelot.
Four grey walls, and four grey towers,
Overlook a space of flowers,
And the silent isle imbowers
The Lady of Shalott.
|Anin hîr, dathar-‘wathrannen,
I lynt lyng pennar aphannen
Ad lebyr; adh ú-huilonen
Lunt lodant nan ram ídhannen
Lodad dad an Gamelod
Ach va idír i huiloneth5?
Egor den idír na chenneth?
Egor the hinnen min ndorath,
I chiril os Salod?
|To the river, willow-veiled,
The heavy boat slants downwards followed
By horses; and not greeted
A boat floated with a desirable sail
Floating down to Camelot:
But who saw the greeter?
Or saw her at the window?
Or is she known in all the lands,
The lady of Shalott?
|By the margin, willow-veiled,
Slide the heavy barges trailed
By slow horses; and unhailed
The shallop flitteth silken-sailed
Skimming down to Camelot:
But who hath seen her wave her hand?
Or at the casement seen her stand?
Or is she known in all the land,
The Lady of Shalott?
|Crithoer, crithad ne minuial,
Mi faing iaw apharch orchal
Lastar ‘laer veren lend iallol
Od i hirion hwiniol,
Dad ani meraid Camelod:
Nuin galad Ithil, i grithor
brastol ‘othair mi thynd na-nadhor,
Lastol pêd “Elleth e-ninglor,
I chiril os Salod.”
|Reapers, reaping in morning,
In the beards of dry, tall corn
Hears a festive, sweet song calling
From the great spinning river,
Down to the towers of Camelot:
Under the light of the Moon, the reaper
Carrying bundles of grass in the hills with fields,
Listening, he says, “The Elf-maid of the water lilies,
The Lady of Shalott.”
|Only reapers, reaping early
In among the bearded barley,
Hear a song that echoes cheerly
From the river winding clearly,
Down to towered Camelot:
And by the moon the reaper weary,
Piling sheaves in uplands airy,
Listening, whispers “‘Tis the fairy
Lady of Shalott.”
Part 2 to come…
It was difficult, but I managed to make all of the lines either four or eight syllables long, so you can sing along with Loreena Mckennett in Sindarin.
I used Sindarin in the style of Doriath. It gives the translation an archaic feel.
- 1. rídhien
- “Great Fields” from “fields-vast/great/wide” (rîdh+iend).
- 2. ell
- “Sky” from Tolkien’s earlier version of Doriathrin (gell) under the root ƷEL.
- 3. Salod, Camelod, Lanselod
- Some of you may be curious why I wrote “Salod” for “Shalott” and “Camelod” for “Camelot” and “Lanselod” for “Lancelot” in the translation. I was simply translating the words into Sindarin phonology. Sindarin doesn’t have the “SH” sound, and P’s, T’s, and C’s directly following a vowel at the end or within a word must become B’s, D’s, or G’s.
- 4. gôl
- “Wave” from Telerin (vola).
- 5. suiloneth
- “Greeter” (suil+oneth) modeled after “bread-giver” (bassoneth).